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"Lia felt her hair raise, her skin lift itself away from the bone."

Oh good, at least it's confirmed they are actually aliens

"she hadn't disappeared on them" What? Lia that is all you literally do. In fact you and your mother are both at least as bad as Emile. Though I suppose Allison has managed to a little less damage, though not effort of her own.

Oh Lord Lia is such a horrible person. Empathetic hah

You know who's actually been abandoned most in this book? Jacob. By literally everyone

Emile go hang hour with emo teenagers or at school freshmen. Trust me, you'll find your people there

Emile don't even pretend that you have ever cared about your brother. The very moment he was no longer useful to you, you didn't care at all

You know Emile, it's really hard to feel sorry for your "abandonment" when you caused all the trouble in the first place by being deliberately selfish. People tried to help you genuinely but you screwed then over. But no you're the only victim ever of everything.

You know Limetown isn't very important in this book called Limetown. I guess cause the creators only charge about Emile who sadly isn't nearly as interesting as the premise of the podcast first season. Just generic chosen one nonsense here

Definitely it's best when your protagonist actually makes no choices at all. I mean sure it's a theme but when you have to write from an alternate dimension where people don't act like people anymore I'm not sure it's transferable

<spoiler>Small child witnesses her father's burned corpse? Nah definitely worry about the dude you boned once and dumped.</spoiler> kinda incel like I hate to say, thinking of that progression.