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Page 10- (Vic) “Still, Ross was his partner, his best friend...”
Page 145- (Vic) “Ross was a good partner, and while they weren’t best friends...”
WTH?!? Continuity people. Shouldn’t this have been established by the author from the beginning? Or at least caught by an editor or beta reader? Ross doesn’t seem like Vic’s best friend so far in the book.
— Mar 14, 2020 07:05PM
Page 145- (Vic) “Ross was a good partner, and while they weren’t best friends...”
WTH?!? Continuity people. Shouldn’t this have been established by the author from the beginning? Or at least caught by an editor or beta reader? Ross doesn’t seem like Vic’s best friend so far in the book.
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