Kat Brownell’s Reviews > The Walshes: The Coming of Eve > Status Update

Eve pointed to a spot on her garter, inches from her pussy. She pouted. “It’s empty.” He rolled his eyes and pulled out a twenty. He pushed the bill into her garter making sure to brush his hand against her clit.

Are you serious right now? This is the NARRATOR using this language. Are you trying to be literature or porn? Because you're failing at both.

Somebody tell me I don't have to read this just because I won it in an ARC.
Also, THROUGH and THREW are not synonyms. Where TF were the editors on this one.
This is a solid 2 star book, but if April stays with her abusive dickhead husband I'm knocking off another star.