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Excellent story until Nina returned from captivity. Then it was all tensionless explaining and predictable, somewhat awkward/phoney-sounding dialogue and actions. The ending ‘reveal’ of her marriage was annoying and contrived.
Mar 23, 2020 06:34AM
The Captive

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