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The prose bogs it down a little. The amount of times I see Amory’s name in a single small passage repeatedly comes across as clunky.
They’ve known each other two days and the possessiveness Phillip suddenly has over Amory is off putting just a little.
Chapter 5 surprise this universe has magic.
— Apr 01, 2020 04:53AM
They’ve known each other two days and the possessiveness Phillip suddenly has over Amory is off putting just a little.
Chapter 5 surprise this universe has magic.
