Shirley’s Reviews > Forgive Us Our Trespasses > Status Update

I know they are catholic but all that unprotected sex. They are going to get preggo real quick.

“Semi frozen vodka” um, pure vodka wouldn’t freeze so if it was partially frozen that would be a good indicator that it had been watered down. I mean like basic stuff isn’t even fact checked. Is there a proof reader? Some of the grammar seems wrong and awkward.

I’m not convinced the author knows what a nun is. Usually romance authors research a topic very heavily before writing a book. You can’t just dump a woman against her will at a nunnery and suddenly she’s a horny nun. It takes years and years to become a real nun. I’m an atheist and even I know this. Sheesh.

Wth, she just has random sex w the ups guy?? I just can’t with this book. It reminds me of the poorly written and ill conceived erotica a college classmate in my creative writing class turned in.

Where would a nun even get fishnet stockings and a razor???
For a nunnery, they think about men a lot.

So far my thoughts, you can’t make out someone’s sexy body under habits. It’s literally there to hide your body. Sister Monica is a terrible nun. And how can she possible be a physician’s assistant if blood makes you woozy? Isn’t she helping minor wounds? Is she fainting constantly?