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Reached Chapter 5...sentence structure errors in Chapter 4 with a missing word, but again as previous chapters these do no takeaway from reading the story...gripped at this point to keep going, the quick flashbacks with the parents are well-written with strong character persona, the setting is incredible, the narration feels mature for the POV age, and I can't tell if this is a first draft or 50th, but ready for C5!!

Reached Chapter 4...oh, the storytelling pulls me further in..sentence structure and punctuation issues, but none bother me...the story is well told, carried well, and the character personas and developments are refreshing...it's sort of a relaxed read without a show of conflict though it's enjoyable to read and visualize the scenes. I'm eager to meet this person on the cover. I look forward to Chapter 4.

Reached Chapter 3...so far the storytelling is enjoyable with a comfortable pace and decent descriptions, worldbuilding, and setting. Context is given properly to different pieces that help shape the plot. Some sentence structure issues with punctuation errors, but these don't distract from reading the story. I appreciated the introductory warning about the content, so I look forward to Chapter 3.