Karla Schneider’s Reviews > The Initiation > Status Update

So a bit of voyeur seem to quality this book for the "Dark" category, which was disappointing. And while the plot was well above average with some unexpected fresh ideas, once again amateur writers produced a bunch of one dimensional characters.
The sauce is in the details, the imperfections. But we never got to meet the girl with green hair, we lose her less than a chapter into the book.