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Joseph
is 2% done
Reached Chapter 2...In Chapter 1 there are comma abuse issues though they don't disrupt the storytelling...the descriptions are decent to great (tattoo descriptions were a bit lengthy, but everything else was well-written)...the flashbacks were incorporated smoothly...character personas and interactions were a joy to read...the cliffhanger was a joy to read and built excitment...look forward to Chapter 2
— Apr 13, 2020 09:35PM
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Joseph
is 3% done
Reached Chapter 3...the story is well-written so far...don't see any errors in the writing and the buildup to the chapter ending was satisfying...the addition of the characters at the farm were well-balanced with conversation, interaction, and facial expressions...the personas helped distinguish the additional characters and the progression into Chapter 3 is done well that I read the first page in curiosity...C3 next
— Apr 26, 2020 10:41AM
