TinaNicole ☠ Le Book Nikita ☠’s Reviews > Undying Love > Status Update

The rest is an excerpt from the sequel? Are you fucking kidding me?

"Yes, only mine. No other man could touch her. Ever. Not even a dead one." Uh, what? Why would dead guys touching her ever be an issue, let alone one that needed clarification? I think me and this book need to take a break. I need space.

First he says all she had was a bloody nose and bruises and now he's waxing poetic about seeing her so close to death. Hmmmm, I too have almost died. I thought I saw the light and everything. Good thing I had a bandaid for that paper cut or I may not have made it.

"Oh, Golden Boy!" "Oh, Baby!" Oh, FFS!

"..and then set her down on one of the seating banquets that lined the other walls." uh, I think you meant "banquettes" not "banquets" you Fuckwad.

So, her second job is as a masseuse, huh? Does she, maybe, specialize in cock massage? Is she trained in the art of the happy ending? I'm pretty sure this chicks a pro.

Another poorly written book. Awesome. Weird word usage that's extremely distracting. I had to actually substitute some during the sex scenes to even get through them. He poured his erection into her. Really? Is his erection liquid? I'll probably finish but only because its not that long. These authors need to fucking stop. Your fun hobby (that you're shit at) is making my hobby unbearable. Fuck you, very much.