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J.A. Belfield
J.A. Belfield is 6% done
Do Amber and Kaylee even like each other? They're a couple of biatches to one another whenever they're together. I have no freakin' idea why these two consider each other a friend.
And the poor editing is starting to give me hives, so the story had better be worth pursuing for.
May 22, 2013 01:10AM
Renhala

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J.A. Belfield
J.A. Belfield is 9% done
Urgh. I actually LOATHE Amber's character. Am I supposed to feel this way about her?
May 22, 2013 01:38AM
Renhala


J.A. Belfield
J.A. Belfield is 7% done
Who the hell is Russell? When did this dude enter the scene and get introduced by name? Did I blink, or something?
This is making me sad. :(
May 22, 2013 01:22AM
Renhala


J.A. Belfield
J.A. Belfield is 4% done
This is a little boring/slow so far, and the lack of editing is starting to give me eye twitches. Let's see how long I can tolerate all these misplaced commas and word repetitions.
May 21, 2013 01:03PM
Renhala


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