Mariana’s Reviews > Breathe into Me > Status Update
Mariana
is 50% done
So far it's a really great story. The writing is good and the plot is also great. The only this that keeps bothering me is that the author didn't use contractions consistently so it made the character's dialogue and thoughts a bit formal. Other than that I seriously doubt i'll be able to put it down.
— May 23, 2013 05:28PM
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Mariana
is 75% done
Story is building up and I love it! Still no use of contractions and it's a little annoying. There are also some, hand-to-forehead, word mistakes.
— May 24, 2013 08:53AM
