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And the book is so scattered - paragraphs that keep switching subject, leaps of logic for no reason, a new pov almost every chapter. I just want to yell at the book components to shut up, get back in the goddamn line, and tell a story.
— May 26, 2013 11:05AM
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Cyna
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And I still have no idea why she keeps running from the police.
— May 31, 2013 03:06PM
Cyna
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Yes, I think the most appropriate thing for a cop to say while holding a gun on a bloody, scared, naked, and until recently, missing, woman wandering away from a crime scene is "You've been on my mind."
— May 31, 2013 02:59PM
Cyna
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So thus far we have an Asian woman with green eyes, and Asian man with blue eyes, and now another Asian woman with "citrine" eyes. JFC.
— May 31, 2013 02:23PM
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Oh my god. Not only does she fart, but her burp rattles windows. Is her gas going to be a freaking plot point?
— May 28, 2013 10:39AM
Cyna
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So many status updates cuz I don't want to go back to reading :/
— May 26, 2013 11:06AM
Cyna
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But there is so much info we're getting scattered about with little cohesiveness. Lots of info, about zero forward momentum in the plot.
— May 26, 2013 11:02AM
Cyna
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Honestly, thanks to all the different POVs we've been subjected to, I have no idea what Lily does and doesn't know, as opposed to the reader. I suspect there are probably plot holes I'm missing because of this.
— May 26, 2013 11:01AM
Cyna
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Aside from proximity, we've really been given no reason to believe that Lily's neigbor's death is related to her bf's at all. And IDEK what Lily's experience is. Was it an attack? Self defense? I have no flipping idea.
— May 26, 2013 10:59AM
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Hahahahaha omg for some reason turning in to a dog has made her eyelashes thicker.
— May 26, 2013 10:27AM
Cyna
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" "Oh shit!" Lily exclaimed. Thankfully, it was a girl. A boy would have snatched her, stolen her phone, and used her for a science experiment. The girl looked spooked." This is not how I envision boys OR girls reacting to a talking dog.
— May 24, 2013 11:05AM

