Esther Jones’s Reviews > The Sphere of Infinity: An Aladdin Retelling Novella > Status Update

"The planet was already turning away from its sun, so they’d need to look for whatever they had to look at night."
....what?

"She wanted to say she was sorry for making him move his hand away from her, but she wasn’t sure how to word it."
Clearly the author also doesn't know how to word it, because this is SUCH an awkward sentence

A scene that should have been emotional and heart wrenching is cold and flat.

I really don't like Jasper. He's an asshole.

"...she didn’t really trust him, which was very unfair."
Oh my God, he's so entitled!

So Jasper has never been interested in girls before but immediately falls for Alana. Sure. Right.

Oh, Jasper has "read all about" the dragons, has he? Good lord, he's an arrogant asshole.

I already hate Jasper. He's an asshole who thinks he's a good guy. Ugh.