Erin’s Reviews > The Shadow of What Was Lost > Status Update
Erin
is 10% done
Started slow but picked up around ch4. Ch 6 was straight up Inn of the Prancing Pony. It is not clear to me why the Gifted are so hated and why becoming a Shadow is so bad if you don't have any magic anyway? Hopefully it becomes clearer...
— May 03, 2020 09:17AM
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Erin
is 52% done
Chapter 24 is distinctly reminiscent of the Mines of Moria... and all this info-dumping in conversations between characters and flashbacks/dreams is tiring. And none of the settings are fleshed out AT ALL. I have no image in my mind what any of these 800 places characters have been to look or feel like.
— May 07, 2020 07:07PM
