Veronica’s Reviews > Pride and Precipitation > Status Update

“‘Will you consider being my girl?’
Her friends all said, ‘Oh, how sweet,’ and put their hands to their heart.
Breezy smiled shyly. ‘Your girl?’
He nodded. ‘My steady girl. Exclusive.’
‘Really?’ Wow. Her smile widened. ‘I think I’d like that.’
‘And I will be your steady guy.’”

Who talks like this? I’d use the Hermione gif again but it seems excessive.

Are there really women out there who find it romantic when men make fools of themselves in public for them?

To the best of my knowledge, USC doesn’t have a ballroom dancing champion...

“Why had he ever unleashed that power to attract every other male in sight? Tonight he wished it were back in its braid, hiding her sexuality from other men.”

I don’t...someone wrote this, sent this to an editor, and thought it should go to publication?

Why are we still introducing side characters and their romantic lives? I get this is supposed to be part of a series but I. Do. Not. Care.

I stand corrected. The trendy thing to do is to pull your side braid back into a bun.

“He pulled out his iPhone and started a note, listing the things he knew Breezy liked.
Crab.
Weather.
Disney movies.
He hesitated, then added, Me...?”

This is supposed to be a grown man, y’all.

Forget the side braid bun thing. Apparently letting down your “prim and proper hair” shows off you “natural sexiness” and caused every single male within a 10 foot radius to fight over you. Who knew?

“He’d seemed stunned, almost like a man who had finally realized she was a woman. Weird thought, but that’s what it had felt like. She liked him looking at her like she was a woman. A sexy woman. Because she didn’t feel sexy most of the time.”

“He’d wanted sexy? Definitely. He’d wanted fabulous? Wow. He’d wanted stunning? Oh, yeah.”