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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 17 of 450
Wait, this isn't always in first person? "I" is sometimes "Cat." So confusing!
May 06, 2020 11:17AM
The Arrival (BirthRight Trilogy, #1)

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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 19 of 450
I'm having so much trouble getting into this. I can't tell anyone apart and the head jumping is giving me whiplash.
May 09, 2020 08:21AM
The Arrival (BirthRight Trilogy, #1)


Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 14 of 450
I keep forgetting this is first person narrative. The narration tells us exactly what everyone is feeling, which is third person omniscient, then suddenly, we get an "I". Also, this part has way too much description of everyone's physical appearance.
May 06, 2020 11:13AM
The Arrival (BirthRight Trilogy, #1)


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