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Jaimee Ghost
Jaimee Ghost is 9% done
Jesus, this guy is scary. Just how i like em ;)
Jun 11, 2013 10:14PM
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Jaimee Ghost
Jaimee Ghost is 82% done
There are literally three characters in this entire book.
Jun 12, 2013 10:27AM
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Jaimee Ghost
Jaimee Ghost is 74% done
Inconsistency. I thought Grecia's mate's name was Blake? More noticeable in a shorter story.
Jun 12, 2013 10:08AM
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Jaimee Ghost
Jaimee Ghost is 72% done
Ugh, just fucking do it.
Jun 12, 2013 10:02AM
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Jaimee Ghost
Jaimee Ghost is 57% done
What the general fuck
Jun 12, 2013 09:49AM
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Jaimee Ghost
Jaimee Ghost is 47% done
Lots of comma splice...
Jun 12, 2013 08:18AM
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Jaimee Ghost
Jaimee Ghost is 45% done
I hate when authors use descriptions like "the male" "the older lupe" in a sentence such as "Tucker felt drawn toward the lupe but he wondered if the male would still be attracted to him if he blah blah blah"
Jun 12, 2013 08:10AM
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Jaimee Ghost
Jaimee Ghost is 21% done
Freak out, cum twice, pass out?
Jun 11, 2013 10:39PM
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Jaimee Ghost
Jaimee Ghost is 7% done
Oh yeahhhh!!!!!!!!!!
Jun 11, 2013 10:10PM
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