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Hal Evergreen
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Good lord, Lakshmi is such a Mary Sue. Is there anything interesting about this character?
— Jun 14, 2013 02:10PM
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Hal Evergreen
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This writing style is flat and uninteresting, and so are all of the characters. And I know that Lakshmi is beautiful. You don't have to remind me of that fact on every single page.
— Jun 16, 2013 07:08AM
