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Excellent writing, great descriptions, odd POV, I don't think I've read fiction written in second narrative before... I'll need more time to wrap my head around my thoughts of second-person.
— Jun 15, 2013 04:13PM
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Kimberly
is 37% done
Excellent writing, great descriptions, odd POV, as if Rachel is writing letters to Merrick.
— Jun 15, 2013 04:07PM
Kimberly
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When your past surfaces as doubt, my heart aches or you. I run the back of my fingers down your cheek, across the stubble along your jaw. “It’s real, Merrick. Believe in us.” I like that.... when your past surfaces a doubt... great description.
— Jun 15, 2013 07:42AM
