Jen’s Reviews > The Morningstar Diaries: Ava > Status Update
Jen
is 75% done
Definitely need an editor. There are missing words and tense issues, some misspellings as well.
— Jun 19, 2013 02:11AM
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Jen
is 38% done
Still editing issues. The description of Ava and Luce's home and the surrounding gardens is so fantastic that I would love to see it illustrated.
— Jun 18, 2013 11:37AM
Jen
is 27% done
Some editing issues, but am drawn into the action. Could picture the fight being done very well in a movie scene.
— Jun 18, 2013 01:00AM
Jen
is 27% done
Some editing issues, but am drawn into the action. Could picture the fight beind done very well in a movie scene.
— Jun 18, 2013 12:10AM
