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Jenn
is 42% done
The author keeps skipping ahead in time by a week or more but forgets to have kept the characters going along too. Some redundancy also - when we're catching up with one character a week later we don't need to be reminded of that time passing again for another character just for the sake of mentioning it
— Jun 20, 2013 11:07AM
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Jenn
is 42% done
I like seeing a stronger Scarlet, one who listens to herself rather than just doing what's expected of her. She's ballsy, feisty, and unapologetic.
— Jun 20, 2013 11:07AM
