Erin’s Reviews > A Cut Above the Rest > Status Update

Hmm.

Things improve now that we are past backstory. Protag doesn't know much about pairing wine with food which seems like a surprising failing for a chef.

Whoever edited this book for grammar does not understand comma rule #1: a comma separates two *independent* clauses joined by a conjunction. Maybe it's the independent clause that isn't understood. The excessive inappropriate commas are distracting. (Showing just how compelling the book is not)