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Devlin has a broken leg. How? Just randomly happened; no explanation that sets this whole plot on course? And there are abrupt shifts within paragraphs in the middle of chapters. One minute the brothers are discussion their plan to pose as the other, the next the fake preacher bro is giving a sermon. I feel like I missed pages!
— Jun 16, 2020 08:00PM
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