Kelster’s Reviews > Gemini > Status Update
Kelster
is 56% done
Not as good as I was hoping. The dialogue between the H and o/women is stiff and unbelievable. The H's inner thoughts are like a teenage girls. Insecure ramblings. I like a needy, desperate man but Man is the operative word. No way do I believe his are the thoughts of a 34 yo man. And is she 30 or 18? Reads like so many other NA books. So much mention of this damn secret. It better be fucking HUGE. Again, sheesh.
— Jun 21, 2013 04:19PM
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Kelster
is 22% done
The beginning started strong. I was curious about the characters and where the story would lead. There are some issues with the author switching between past and present tense. As the book moved along the inner monologue does not read as if he is 34 and she is almost 30. They sound like they're in their very early 20's. He is the one with a secret and now damn near all of his inner monologue is him obsessing. Sheesh.
— Jun 21, 2013 10:40AM
