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Sometimes this book reads like a Richard Curtis movie and other times especially on this page, Emma sounds like she's 7 years old. The whole "I want to watch!" I can picture her stomping her feet with her arms folded with a high pitched whiny voice.

The American on the airplane says "You were on a bit of a roll." on page 30. The author needs to work on writing for Americans. They don't really use "a bit of" in their every day language.