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The transformation is very Bella from Twilight, after she turned vampire. 🦇

The whole "snard" part of the plot is beyond disgusting. I guess it makes the story unique in a way, but it's gross to the point where I can't even drink my coffee while reading because I'm afraid I'll gag.

TOO MUCH CIRCUITOUS INNER MONOLOGUE. 🤦🤦🤦

Too much rambling. 😒
The editor should've chopped off some of the repetitive crap; it would have shaved off at least 50 pages of pointless verbiage.

Bonobo-monkey society: Sex, not war.

I both like and dislike this novel. It's definitely unique in some ways (though not always good ways!).

A little more about the strange new planet they are on, and a little less of her incessant inner monologue, would've made for a better read.

She didn't buy and then set free any of the ugly slaves, as I recall. But the good-looking one with the magical unicorn 🍆 was the one who brought out her kinder side.
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This sounds like a conversation between two horny teens, not a 35 & a 40-year-old!!

I wonder if a female of Cat's species has bizarre genitalia as well. 😅😂 (The endless description of his "family jewels" makes me wonder about the author's sanity. 😆)