Richard’s Reviews > Sky in the Deep > Status Update

Loving it and looking at high starage. Could of niggles; jumps around between scenes...often mid chapter without any warning so I suddenly find we jumpt to a planet or flash back or different ship etc.
Secondly people several people (descendants) share the same surname, but the author flicks between referring to people by, first, sir or nick-name so freely I get dead confused as to who is who.