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Oliver
is on page 362 of 498
She needs to stop writing things as "it is definitely not this" when obviously "this" is exactly what she means.
Pg 362 "The darkness makes a horrible sound that is not a scream but that is the closest word Zachary has for the screeching terror in his head and around it".
Hellooooo? "Screeching terror". That's the literal definition of a scream.
— Jul 10, 2020 05:39PM
Pg 362 "The darkness makes a horrible sound that is not a scream but that is the closest word Zachary has for the screeching terror in his head and around it".
Hellooooo? "Screeching terror". That's the literal definition of a scream.
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Oliver
is on page 91 of 498
Very mesmerising prose.
Except I'm tired of all this "something is nothing and nothing is everything that is does not appear to be" crap.
Honestly thinking she should have written the "sweet sorrows" short fiction collection separately.
— Jul 01, 2020 04:42PM
Except I'm tired of all this "something is nothing and nothing is everything that is does not appear to be" crap.
Honestly thinking she should have written the "sweet sorrows" short fiction collection separately.
Oliver
is on page 20 of 498
Will have to see how it develops but she labels the "starless sea" as being both the water-body, and the library-repository next to it.
— Jul 01, 2020 07:02AM
Oliver
is on page 20 of 498
The book is very pretty so far. Things that bother me: gross large words like "incongruousness". Also this kid is a master's student but the description of his work and school life sound like undergrad.
— Jul 01, 2020 06:53AM
