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I hate how you’re hit over the head with details. Like damn, let the reader realize shit for himself at some point.
— Jul 12, 2020 10:11PM
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The writing can be a bit irritating: run-one sentences that tend to confuse the reader, too much telling instead of showing. I think that’s what made it a bit of a flat read. The narrator comes off as an oblivious idiot but I think that may be the point.
— Jul 12, 2020 10:09PM
