Melesse > Status Update

"Elli nodded as the consent ache in her chest got worst." ~•~ I like the characters, I like the story, I like the chemistry between the lovers... but my gods, the writing errors are killing me. Tenses all over the place, countless wrong words as in the above quote, etc. Every time I hit these errors I'm ripped out of the story and I want to go find a red pen. *sighs*