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You just have to ignore the cheesy lines and the mistakes.
"The Demigod of War rode my body like I was his instrument."
Unless it was like "that one time a band camp" ... I think we are mixing similes, and not in a good way.
Also the author needs to find another way to express Mari's concern for her "nature" -(no spoilers) without repeating the same phrases over and over. That's getting a little annoying.
— Jul 25, 2020 04:03PM
"The Demigod of War rode my body like I was his instrument."
Unless it was like "that one time a band camp" ... I think we are mixing similes, and not in a good way.
Also the author needs to find another way to express Mari's concern for her "nature" -(no spoilers) without repeating the same phrases over and over. That's getting a little annoying.
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