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Gerald The Bookworm
is on page 130 of 384
The writing style is really off. Yung mga dialogues? Very unnatural. The story-telling is choppy and all over the place. PURO TELLING, WALANG SHOWING! Ang personality lang ni Luis ay magsabi ng 'fuck' sa dulo ng mga dialogues niya. Ano ba 'to?????
This book started with 5 pages full of amazing praises and reviews tapos ganito mababasa mo? Disppointing!
— Aug 06, 2020 07:38AM
This book started with 5 pages full of amazing praises and reviews tapos ganito mababasa mo? Disppointing!
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Gerald The Bookworm
is on page 300 of 384
Paano mapapatawad ni Kenneth ang sarili niya by loving himself first???? Paano? Hindi sa pangdadrag, pero seryosong tanong. Love the twist tho!
— Aug 06, 2020 09:23PM
Gerald The Bookworm
is on page 264 of 384
Sentence construction, whomst??? Repetition of thoughts everywhere but in different phrase. Dialogues are not realistic sa edad ng mga characters.
Maputi, mapulang labi, mapuputing ngipin, at nangungusap na mga mata lang ang alam na description ng author para sa gwapong lalaki. Like, you can extend your descriptive words tho... just saying.
— Aug 06, 2020 08:42PM
Maputi, mapulang labi, mapuputing ngipin, at nangungusap na mga mata lang ang alam na description ng author para sa gwapong lalaki. Like, you can extend your descriptive words tho... just saying.
Gerald The Bookworm
is on page 210 of 384
*face palm*
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*snort* Ano daw?
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First part, "Tara, alis tayo." "Sige pero sa malapit lang."
Halfway part of the book, nakarating ng Pampanga at pupunta ng Baguio.
Seryoso????
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And kapag nasa Pampanga ka, madedetect ba ng Grindr ang user na nasa Baguio????
— Aug 06, 2020 06:07PM
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*snort* Ano daw?
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First part, "Tara, alis tayo." "Sige pero sa malapit lang."
Halfway part of the book, nakarating ng Pampanga at pupunta ng Baguio.
Seryoso????
~~~
And kapag nasa Pampanga ka, madedetect ba ng Grindr ang user na nasa Baguio????
Gerald The Bookworm
is on page 38 of 384
Something is really off about the author's writing style and the characters' dialogue is unnatural. Pero tatapusin ko pa rin 'to. Hahahaha.
— Aug 06, 2020 05:37AM
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Aug 06, 2020 03:00PM
I wanted to purchase this book because HIV/AIDS is a taboo topic in our country. I was hoping that this book will help me educate myself. I'll wait for your book review first and if the execution isn't done well; I will just watch the series.
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