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Sometimes sentence fragments feel “right”- but sometimes (The walk... was a long one. Made easier for her by..) one just feels in reading “would it -kill- the author to insert words (eg “It was” made easier...)? Helps with flow and readability, many times , too...
— Aug 28, 2020 04:01PM
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