Lizmund’s Reviews > A Death in Vegas > Status Update
Lizmund
is 29% done
Seriously though who finds a dead body and then decides to break into the dead person's house?
— Sep 02, 2020 11:04AM
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Lizmund
is 33% done
For goodness sake why does there have to be fifteen bizarre ways to mention BOOBS?? It's in no way even related to the plot and it's sleazy as shit
— Sep 02, 2020 11:24AM
Lizmund
is 28% done
What is this MC doing?? This guy finds a dead body and is a suspect and he's like "let's go stalk this woman's life and rub my fingerprints all over her car and house" what ???
— Sep 02, 2020 10:58AM
Lizmund
is 20% done
Chapter 5- Audio copy
-Not a big fan of the way female characters are presented
-Dialogue hard to follow sometimes
-Not a fan of main character
— Sep 02, 2020 10:31AM
-Not a big fan of the way female characters are presented
-Dialogue hard to follow sometimes
-Not a fan of main character
