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is 7% done
Short sentences. Cornball humour. Condescending arrogance. By-the-numbers plot development. Zzzzzzz.
— Sep 06, 2020 05:22PM
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is 24% done
Craig's had settled down now, and the pacing and prose are fine. A bit more complexity in the plot and characters. Honestly, I find the sweet little romance more fun than the detection. "Studly Do-Right" cute.
— Sep 06, 2020 07:11PM
