Alan’s Reviews > War of the Witch > Status Update
Alan
is 20% done
I can defiantly tell the author is inexperienced, there're spots where the conversation of the characters could have been expanded so the characters could be developed a little better. Also there is barely any world building. But the plot has promise and I do like the characters.
— Aug 02, 2013 05:30AM
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Alan
is 45% done
Hahahah, ok so this is a fantasy tale, with swords and magic. It's not modern day, but yet when our heros need money they go to a "pawn shop" to sell some of there belongings. Lol I don't remember there being any pawn shops in Lord of the Rings
— Aug 02, 2013 04:28PM
Alan
is 5% done
I can tell the author is fairly inexperienced, but so far I like the story-line, and the character are being fleshed out early in the book.
— Aug 01, 2013 11:42AM
