Status Updates From War of the Witch (Legacies ...

Hahahah, ok so this is a fantasy tale, with swords and magic. It's not modern day, but yet when our heros need money they go to a "pawn shop" to sell some of there belongings. Lol I don't remember there being any pawn shops in Lord of the Rings

I can defiantly tell the author is inexperienced, there're spots where the conversation of the characters could have been expanded so the characters could be developed a little better. Also there is barely any world building. But the plot has promise and I do like the characters.

I can tell the author is fairly inexperienced, but so far I like the story-line, and the character are being fleshed out early in the book.

So far, decent editing and well written... :) I'm interested to see where it goes. I reminds me of some of my favorite fantasy books.

Enjoyable and fast moving!

I'm having trouble holding my interest on this one - will have to put it aside for now and try again in a couple weeks.