⋆Lara⋆’s Reviews > Playing with Fire > Status Update
⋆Lara⋆
is 47% done
"He let his penis spring free from his boxers. It looked like a giant, raging leech pressing against his stomach."
What is with Shen and bad similes?
Meanwhile, I'm going to go bleach my eyes, because I did not just read this shit!
I. DID. NOT. READ. THIS SHIT!
— Sep 16, 2020 07:57AM
What is with Shen and bad similes?
Meanwhile, I'm going to go bleach my eyes, because I did not just read this shit!
I. DID. NOT. READ. THIS SHIT!
22 likes · Like flag
⋆Lara⋆’s Previous Updates
Comments Showing 1-17 of 17 (17 new)
date
newest »
newest »
message 1:
by
Caoimhe
(new)
Sep 16, 2020 08:39AM
🤣🤣
reply
|
flag
K wrote: "Lara, are your eyes okay? I’ve not read this but I’m pretty sure I gagged from this alone."No shit! And there's more here. (No kidding!)
I'm at that stage where I can neither spit nor swallow this!
I'm reading this book and I haven't reached that part yet. The "raging leech" was over done. I hope when I reach this part it doesn't ruin the rest of the story for me. For now I hope the story is going okay for you. 👀
Birjis wrote: "I'm reading this book and I haven't reached that part yet. The "raging leech" was over done. I hope when I reach this part it doesn't ruin the rest of the story for me. For now I hope the story is ..."The story is going okay-ish for me. How about you?:-D
Jade wrote: "WTF? Giant Leech?? She's seriously lost her mind on this one...."Bad comparisons, right? In all the books that I've read, a dick was never compared to a leech!! Leave it up to Shen to cook up something unique.
Jade: After many books of L.J. Shen this book finally held my attention. Lara's this update warned me of the "leech" but other than this I enjoyed the book. 😂





