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Character 1: "Were you alone with so and so?"
Main Character: "Yeah."
Me: What? No you weren't. Did I miss an entire section where you were along with this person?
Main Character: [Flashes back to the ENTIRE PAGES LONG SCENE where they were alone with this person]
I'm sorry but that's ridiculous. This thing wasn't written on a typewriter. Just go back and insert this missing scene. Useless interruption.
— Sep 22, 2020 02:41PM
Main Character: "Yeah."
Me: What? No you weren't. Did I miss an entire section where you were along with this person?
Main Character: [Flashes back to the ENTIRE PAGES LONG SCENE where they were alone with this person]
I'm sorry but that's ridiculous. This thing wasn't written on a typewriter. Just go back and insert this missing scene. Useless interruption.
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