Michael K’s Reviews > Hook: Dead to Rights > Status Update
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New rule: you can only use the word 'eviscerate' twice in a novel, three or more is far too reliant.
— Oct 05, 2020 05:43PM
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Michael K
is 50% done
Really, really disappointed in the character development of Captain Hook. I lot of her 'action' has been explained...but the combo of that and personality is nearly non-existent at this point. Sure, she quirks a smile here or there--but the writings of her expressions are flat, and her character motive is behind the ball.
Not really a fan, but I'll finish it, because the concept of a Hook gender-swap has got me.
— Oct 05, 2020 04:02PM
Not really a fan, but I'll finish it, because the concept of a Hook gender-swap has got me.
