Marem Ruth’s Reviews > Wade in the Water: Poems > Status Update
Marem Ruth
is 26% done
Loved the first section, but the second, while thematically contained, is in stark contrast to the first.
— Oct 12, 2020 01:17PM
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Marem Ruth
is 71% done
I'm starting this last section and I'm liking it more.
— Oct 16, 2020 12:50PM
Marem Ruth
is 60% done
Not that enthused by the book. The longer poems and those with a lot of diction aren't poetic and stand in stark contrast to the shorter poems with higher conceptual language. If each were its own book, it would be different, but instead it feels like I'm wading into still waters and raging waters.
— Oct 14, 2020 11:43AM
Marem Ruth
is 40% done
Glad to be out of the second section. Smith's language is more poetic when it's actual poems instead of vernacular iterations. I liked the second section, but it's not really poetry and isn't as strong as the other, more traditional poems with the same themes.
— Oct 13, 2020 08:40AM

