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"He looked as though he wanted to argue the toss a little more." Huh? Once again, Americans don't say things like that. "It was a one-off." ?? You mean, "a one time thing?"
— Jul 22, 2010 03:38AM
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another thing...Americans don't end sentences with "yeah?" As in: "We should eat first, yeah?" Americans don't say "bits." As in: "all he could think about was rubbing their naughty bits together" or " 'But you left out the good bit of the story!' " No. We say "parts." Also, we would never FLOG anything on ebay, we sell stuff. Whew. Okay, rant complete.
— Jul 22, 2010 02:33AM
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa......this author is Australian, writing about Americans. But every other line they say something distinctly Aussie, like: "Norsca-fresh!" What the hell is that? I had to look it up, it's apparently an Aussie deodarant product. "Were you a girl guide?" OF COURSE NOT! Because Americans are Girl SCOUTS! Get it straight.
— Jul 22, 2010 02:31AM
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Jul 22, 2010 05:18AM
They're all American, it takes place in LA. I can understand why she needed this story to take place in LA, the h/h write for a soap opera, but really, just ask an American to read it through. They're small errors, but completely annoying!
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