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The MC is so shallow, vain, petty, and narcissistic. She’s OBSESSED with making men like her. She tells us she has ambitions to like conquer the kingdom but doesn’t seem smart enough for that.
It’s just a dumb story.
SOoo much telling and so little showing.
About 35% of the book is describing people’s clothes and talking about how great MC’s fashion sense is.
I’m liking it less and less the more I read.
— Oct 14, 2020 10:17PM
It’s just a dumb story.
SOoo much telling and so little showing.
About 35% of the book is describing people’s clothes and talking about how great MC’s fashion sense is.
I’m liking it less and less the more I read.
