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Timeline issues in first dozen chapters. Continuity of Montreal vs NY game and family members playing on opposing team in first game. She goes from mad at him to climbing like a tree and mad about no sex in an instant.
— Oct 21, 2020 01:01PM
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Miriam
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Time line is a mess. Totally detracts from the book. Second book in series, but is inconsistent even between the books (Candace vs Ralph finding the new house). May seem to be small things, but just set me off.
— Oct 20, 2020 08:27PM
