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"Took an arrow in the knee."
lol Skyrim, much? ;-)
Now, seriously. The story is interesting so far but the writing style could be improved. Several sentences aren't grammatically correct, and the POV wanders all over the place, which makes it difficult to know any of the characters. Every now and then, there's a beautiful descriptive sentence, but so far those are lost among the "huh?" moments.
— Aug 18, 2013 01:50PM
lol Skyrim, much? ;-)
Now, seriously. The story is interesting so far but the writing style could be improved. Several sentences aren't grammatically correct, and the POV wanders all over the place, which makes it difficult to know any of the characters. Every now and then, there's a beautiful descriptive sentence, but so far those are lost among the "huh?" moments.
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Having reached this point, my interest is diminishing. We've entered a endless loop of "how will I pay for next term's tuition?" Where'd the fantasy story go?
— Aug 25, 2013 09:24AM
Nadine
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I'm amused. The prologue (just one page long) begins with "It was night again" and the first chapter begins with "It was felling night."
— Aug 16, 2013 01:30PM
