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Carson Quarnberg
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The story is already bloody and creepy and I'm into it, but all the sentence fragments take me out of the otherwise awesome imagery.
"Blood dripping on the boards between his scuffed wing tip shoes." is not a paragraph.
— Oct 22, 2020 10:02AM
"Blood dripping on the boards between his scuffed wing tip shoes." is not a paragraph.
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