Annmarie’s Reviews > Whom the Gods Love > Status Update
Annmarie
is 12% done
One major pet peeve so far: so many unnecessary words. So much over explaining. I don’t need 3 paragraphs of explaining a simple concept that could have been explained in a single sentence. You don’t need to say a characters name 3 times in a sentence, especially when there are only 2 characters in that scene.
— Oct 22, 2020 08:23PM
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Annmarie’s Previous Updates
Annmarie
is 78% done
Really not a fan of the fact the author uses “it” to refer to a gender fluid god character. Really? You couldn’t just use they?
— Nov 02, 2020 07:32PM
Annmarie
is 54% done
The characters still seem very flat. There’s some back story for some of them, but not much. There personalities are super simple and sometimes change from one paragraph to the next. But there’s no life or connection in them, it makes it hard to care for the characters.
— Oct 30, 2020 03:20PM
Annmarie
is 42% done
Ok the writing has improved which is great but the characters still seem flaky and undefined.
— Oct 27, 2020 12:40PM
Annmarie
is 21% done
The characters seem... inconsistent. Callan started out as a somewhat humble man just on a mission for his love and then suddenly he’s a callous and pompous king who’s rude and condescending to everyone?
— Oct 24, 2020 07:09AM
