Shauna ’s Reviews > Not at First > Status Update

I read reviews for this book and they were all pretty good. Which begs me to ask: what is everyone reading? Have standards dropped so low in the advent of self-publishing that it is no longer vital that an author know how to use commas? I'll read nearly anything and I ALWAYS finish books I start. But I can't get more than 9% through this. And I've tried three times! The wording is unclear and repetitive. WTH?!?