Elithanathile’s Reviews > Laurel Heights > Status Update

// This author is pissing me off with her blatant laziness here … The typos are absolutely ridiculous and smacks of absolute laziness!! I’m really fucking pissed!

// What is this author doing?!? Scott and Will, the two MCs, are so completely interchangeable in their personalities, it takes me a minute to realize who is who, because they sound exactly the same, down to their speech patterns and internal monologues!! I’m irritated!!

// One more thing, being an ally does not give you the right to joke about someone’s sexuality! I wouldn’t expect any of the people I know to joke about my heterosexuality, and I’m not going to poke fun at somebody else’s orientation simply because I am an ally!! Being an ally means being an ally! Also, authors, for fuck’s sake, stop saying preference, it’s not a preference, it’s an orientation!!!

// “Scott was beautiful, plain and simple, and she often told him that he was doing a disservice to women everywhere by not even attempting to go down the straight and narrow.”

~ This is the most ignorant and ridiculous point view, even though we do know that she means well and is joking! I think even saying something like that is deserving of a fucking hard bitch slap to the head!! Shut the fuck up, bitch!!